That morning a purple bruise encased my right eye, and that proved the spiteful ghost, the one that squatted in my bed- room closet despised me.
There's a flatness to your three-syllable lines that I find appealing, a kind of enforced lack of stress or emphasis. Reading your work is an antidote to the fruity, ornate verse that crops up so often here at Substack.
Peter, thank you so much for the commenting and reading. I really appreciate your kind words. Take care.
😂 Thank you
you are very welcome
Bravo, Roger. 👏
Jeremy, thank you very much.
My pleasure, Roger.
Love the opening stanza
Thank you very much
de nada
I sleep with the light on to take some of their power away
hey, that is a very good point. I will do that!
Careful with those.
Yes, very true. Thank you for reading and commenting too,
Don't mention it. Even if one person likes or comments on any of my work, I feel good, so I know what you mean. Keep it up.
I agree and thank you
There's a flatness to your three-syllable lines that I find appealing, a kind of enforced lack of stress or emphasis. Reading your work is an antidote to the fruity, ornate verse that crops up so often here at Substack.
Peter, thank you so much for the commenting and reading. I really appreciate your kind words. Take care.
😂 Thank you
you are very welcome
Bravo, Roger. 👏
Jeremy, thank you very much.
My pleasure, Roger.
Love the opening stanza
Thank you very much
de nada
I sleep with the light on to take some of their power away
hey, that is a very good point. I will do that!
Careful with those.
Yes, very true. Thank you for reading and commenting too,
Don't mention it. Even if one person likes or comments on any of my work, I feel good, so I know what you mean. Keep it up.
I agree and thank you